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Thanks for the review! I actually noticed that too; I've been debating whether or not to change it to Live-er :P But anyway, thanks again!!

Disclaimer! It definitely needs to be refined; at first glance I see some definite awkward points, but overall, I'm satisfied with how this turned out. Opinions? :) I’m in my ...

Awh :) It's a fantastic tribute, and without a doubt one that reflects the feeling of every Harry Potter fan (myself included!) It truly is the end of an era, ...

I actually really like this poem! Poetry based on photos or images are always stronger, especially when you branch out like you did by drawing the image into that of ...

I have to disagree with Flower, above :) The point of repetition in a poem is to create emphasis, and I believe you did just that. Of course, without the ...

Hey guys! Sorry I didn't reply to your reviews earlier! Been on vacation, haha. But I know what you guys mean about the whole lack of emotion to parts of ...

It’s nothing, really. Just a dried, crumpled flower lying crushed at the bottom of my old mahogany jewelry box. But I can’t help sifting through tangled chains and back-less earrings ...

Destitute; alone, unaware of the silence hiding ‘round the bend. Great stories told of men and lore begetting thoughts of triumph, power, lust, desire, revenge. I sway, steady footing naught ...

Wow. I really, really liked this. I love how you went through each point of his life, then followed through with a summary of it at the end. It made ...

Thanks for all the positive feedback! Morgan, the "silence, noisy, noisy silence" bit refers to the first few opening lines, where I describe the 'sound' leaking through the walls as ...

Hey! I really liked these. They're awesome. First one: Overall, I like it a lot. The scene is clear, and you gave a lot of great, little detail. The only ...

Hey there Pacific! I like this. You definitely have talent, here. Overall, the picture is quite good. Face: I think you did a very good job on his face. Everything ...

I'm a bit confused on this piece, as well. The one thing that holds me back from classifying it is the fact that... well, there's not other description. The point ...

Hey there! My name is Sam, and I'll be your reviewer today. I'm going to start out with a few nitpicks, but the crux of my review will be below. ...

Wow! Thanks JaceClayton =] I'm really glad you liked it! Haha, I'm thinking I should have submitted it as my suspense piece instead... this one leaves a pretty nice emotional ...