skjold

summer is to do everything that you couldnt do during the school year

fairly good Maybe it was a long time since she last felt the sun. That thought in her mind, Lily tried to absorb as much of it as possible. this ...

the problem with stories like this is that its all been done before dragons and such what you need to do is describe more, make the setting and characters different ...

Damon simply refused to get cheered this sentenced should be changed hint. cheer has more than one menaing

very good

i really like your beginning the whole story line is good :)

distant realm of amundsal. heres chapter one of my novel mage of dragons please criticize my work so i know how to improve please dont criticize my grammer and mechanics ...