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here's a review on just grammer bolded and the in italics is the correction But since those glorious years, all is changed. A poverty but little above the level of ...

here's part d of arolands leper Cicerin fitted a golden fletched arrow to his Triddian yew bow. He released, sending the arrow flying through the air whistling. Its mark was ...

very good i thought here's a quick sum up of what i think you used very good description the characters are well defined, even if they are based off of ...

here is part c enjoy and please crit I wonder where tose Bandits be off to. Bad idea it was to camp next to ta road. Oagle fondled the runic ...

heres part of chapter two enjoy and please criticize Chapter Two: Aroland’s Leper Year Four-Hundred Twilight loomed over the once azure sky, slowly covering the sky in a yellow black ...

heres a short review for the beggining you said that he was unconscious. how can he still have a bloody wound if he was unconscious. you should write how long ...

ya i have to agree with sister nebraska. you don't want to have redundancy, it can make a story become boring when you use one word too many times. you ...

hi fairly good story i thought you described the characters well if you ask me the name Jyuna became a little irksome to kep trying to pronounce in my head. ...

hey very well written if you ask me. i didnt really find anything wrong with it except: Only the best story tellers can give their story a life of its ...

this sentence is a wee bit wierd Elves love to say I’m a very beautiful elf I’m tall and slender with very fair skin, and very long black hair add ...

heres part of chapter two enjoy and please write a review, but not about grammer and spelling thanks Chapter Two: Aroland’s Leper The fall of Járl Year three-hundred and ninety-nine ...

i get as in pretty much everything, except science :x

i think that it is pretty good but then again it could just be me

heres the answers to your many queries Has your number increased since first being prescribed these lenses? yes Have you been able to naturally cure your number? nope Do you ...

what about the name susan hall :?: :?: :?: