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Re: Swing
Hey thanks for the replies. I must admit, I was struggling for a way to end it, but I do agree with what you guys have said. Thanks!
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: 101 Ways to Die #2
I love it. Can I just say that I loved the Glee reference at the beginning? I love that show! Keep writing these!
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Stephen King's Biggest Fan
Hey, it's Amanda, your average ordinary teenager. Except for the fact that I have an unusual obsession with Stephen King. He is my biggest inspiration and is one of the ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Stephen King legendary writer?
My favorites are definitely IT, The Shining, The Talisman, and The Long Walk. This man is my biggest inspiration.
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Monster Love
Wow... that was a very interesting poem. I loved it! It was dark and mysterious. I don't always like poems that rhyme but yours worked really well. You hide from ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: 101 Ways to Die #1
Haha! I enjoy this idea. It is fun and creative. I would love to be a character that dies in your story! I want to get eaten by the mysterious ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Winning Over Winchester (Chapter 1)
I thought it was a good start to a story that could have potential. It's really late, so I didn't see anything to critique on yet. Lord Anzius seemed to ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: The Process of Figuring Myself Out (10/12/10) Part 1
If you need a refresher or missed the last chapter check out the 2 parts October 12, 2010 My entire head was spinning constantly like that little girl's from "The ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
I'm just starting out at YWS and so far, it's been awesome. I hope that one day when I become a best-selling novelist (my dream), I'll be able to thank ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: The Process of Figuring Myself Out (10/11/10) Part 2
Hey! Here is Part 2. Click on the link if you would like to see Part 1! For the first time in my entire life, I opened my ears to ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: The Process of Figuring Myself Out (10/11/10) Part 1
Hey Rena and Loveless! Thanks so much for reviewing my story. I did change the downer in the beginning. Thanks for letting me know that :D Also, I hadn't even ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: The Process of Figuring Myself Out (10/11/10) Part 1
Hello! This is a new novel I am starting, so please let me know what you think and let me know if you want me to continue. I am a ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Back to Square One (3)
I had really nothing to edit reading through this. I might look at it again later. But I thought it was really well done. It's getting more chilling with each ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Swing
I am flying on a swing Soaring, gliding, floating Leaping over the clouds Leaping all the way to heaven I am spinning on a swing Twirling, rotating, whirling Moving so ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Pink Roses
Oh very nice photo, especially for a four-year-old. I'm on the newspaper and yearbook for my school so we are learning all about taking the best photos possible. Personally, I ...
Nov 17, 2009
