simplycomplex

Welcome to YWS! So, this is a good poem, and I like the way you wrote the "reflection" concept. Tell me if you’re truly proud of all that you’ve become, ...

I thought this poem was good and for some reason I really like the title, probably because I don't know where my time goes these days (Internet...?). Anyway, I think ...

Welcome to YWS! So, I like the rhyming in this and the meaning. His face was frozen , lost in pain. His face was lost in memories. Here, I don't ...

I like this poem. It seems humorous but has a deeper meaning at the same time. The words you piece together are very clever. For everyone knows that the best ...

In my opinion, the words in this poem are well chosen. The meaning is clear but you could improve on this by maybe expanding it a little more. Just another ...

This is a nice poem, and I get what you're saying. Let go of my confusion Clear my head of all delusion F inally see the truth A burning need ...

I like this version better, and the stanzas are divided well, too. Dreams of a happy time. Of warm embraces, and beautiful blue eyes, that seem to stare right into ...

Honestly, I really like this poem and it was well written. Time has taken its rage out upon you, and you have been left broken. "It's" is only the contraption ...

Welcome to YWS! Good poem, though I did find a few mistakes. Her big brown eyes looked up at me, and though it was the dead of night, you could ...

I like this poem, it seems so... not peaceful, exactly, but I can't think of the right word to describe it. Is mid August, "It's" or "It is". The sky ...

Nice rhyming and creative poem! But we discovered ourselves in the rain and the wind. But you soon lost yourself when the rain left home. These parts aren't in a ...

Good poem and I like the flow of it. Alone, Forgotten , You don’t care . You’ve left me behind To burn . the flames are upon me, Yet I ...

Very creative and I could never have guessed I'd be reading something like that when I clicked on the title! I really like how it's from the viewpoint of a ...

I like the repetition and the flow of this poem. I pity what knows the sense in hate. Like Angel with one beat. Unlike Baby, who always looks up, Angel ...

Good job sticking to your subject and I like the title. When I look in the mirror What do I see A girl looking back That can not be me ...