simplycomplex

Hello! september sky overhead my skylight daydreams drift away on the string of a single green balloon I think lots of short poems (including published ones) are hard to relate ...

Sort of a random poem I wrote kind of recently. Feel free to rip it to shreds if you wish to, but I'd really appreciate some tips on how to ...

Hey! Good descriptions and I like the way you have those descriptions but also present an important message without ruining your poem. Where there was once life it's (or "it ...

Hi! I thought that was really creative and cute. I can just imagine it in a children's book or something like that :). So, to get grammar out of the ...

I agree with StoryWeaver. The way the lines repeat so many times doesn't do anything to contribute to the poem. I think this is more like song lyrics than a ...

Aw... that was kind of sad but really interesting and creative at the same time. I really don't have much to say because your grammar and form were great though ...

Hey! I like how this poem is basically what everyone thinks but doesn't want to say or much less do most of the time. It's really easy to relate to ...

When I first glanced at the title of this poem I thought it would be something cliche since many poems with a title like "I Love You" are overly cliched. ...

Hey! I like this poem a lot, especially how your line breaks are in many of your poems. My favorite was this part: I shiver in the cold, But the ...

Hi! I really like the imagery in this poem, especially the "embers of the morning" part. There's only one part that I thought should be changed: As I walked through ...

Hello! I think this is a nice idea for a poem and the length of this poem seems just right. And fall deeper and deeper , Into nothing? To get ...

Alright, so, I think short poems are harder to review, but I'll give it a try. Love leaves scars to learn from; (I think it makes more sense to add ...

Hi! Okay, so, what I got from this poem is that someone was mad at the person and left. The first stanza is good, but after reading it I'm expecting ...

Hello! So, I really like this poem. The title captured my attention right away and I knew it would be an interesting poem. :) I like the first stanza the ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! This poem is very loose, and though punctuation is not necessary, spell check really helps with grammar. I don 't beli e ve anything you ...