simple-harmonic-motion

Excellent. However, I doubt very much anyone can write from the perspective of a three year old. Nonetheless this is an intensely entertaining piece. It exudes colour and playfullness from ...

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You evoked the atmosphere well. And in response to some of the commentary that has been beft previous to my reply- please ignore it. the piece puts in my mind ...

Indeed a very interesting piece in which you successfully capture the pace and intensity of battle- not an easy thing to do. However my main qualm with this body of ...

Yelling? I am not yelling and I am not purposely out to insult the work of other people. i'm simple offering an opinion and "critiquing" work. And if you are ...

In this poem you successfully achieve a powerful contrast and for that I think you should be commended. However my main quarrel with this work is that the whole idea ...

RIGHT- 1) You need to decide whether you want to write poetry or prose. Believe it or not there is a difference. Writing a story in verse is pointless- especially ...

OKAY! I'm not going to pretend that that was of any releavance to me and I doubt if you even understood what you were saying yourself. The pervading images and ...

I'd like to say I enjoyed this- poem? but I refuse to lie, especially since it was absolutely boring. Afterall, whats to be gained from being nice and focussing on ...