simmy90

Chapter Three - Crucio At 6:55AM the next morning, Neville woke with a start. He looked at the clock to his right and realized: His Muggle Studies class starts in ...

Chapter Two - Two Carrows and A Trio of Slytherins As the Silver Trio walked through the gloom and fog, Neville caught sight of the loveable, half-giant, Rubeus Hagrid. Neville ...

Chapter One - The Misuse of Dementors “Neville!” Gran shouted up the stairs, “Neville!” She shouted again a second later. He groaned and turned over in his bed so that ...

That was really good. This actually reminds me a bit of a situation I was going through just a few weeks ago, only I was the Annie in your story. ...

I prayed that nightmares hadn’t visited her [s]that night[/s]. I agree with the other reviewer about this one. brushed her cheek ; her eyes flickered open. Just my opinion, but ...

Wow, I can't believe I'm being bombarded (in a good way) by all these amazing sites! Thanks!

I've been working on the same story the last two years and have rewritten it so many times, I can't even count! But somehow, I've kept the same plot the ...

This was a really good chapter! You developed not only Allysa's character quite well, but the story in and of itself. I fully did not expect an already-dead John Smith ...

“The kids talkin’ bout him already?” she said, going back to pounding. “Suppose that makes sense. ‘E was a soldier, sent here to deliver a message to your father, but ...

I like this story so far, but I agree with the first reviewer, you need to describe settings a bit more. The wording used in this story makes me think ...

It was an interesting plot-line, but I have to agree with the first person to review. Make sure to use spell-check everytime you post something and read it over and ...

Thanks to the all responders! It took me about an hour to come up with this story and apparently, that hour of nothing but writing worked; I've been praised! HAHA! ...

A hundred days have made me older, Since the last time that I saw your pretty face, A thousand lies have made me colder, And I don't think I can ...

"Sometimes… being a coward is the bravest thing you can do.” Did you make this up yourself or find it in some other book or on the internet? Either way, ...

The rave: This is an interesting era to write about. Just the whole "legend" behind the history of this, lynching of the accused but innocent. Might I suggest to you ...