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Re: Sognore 4.0
(Sorry, it sent three times- glitch*) anyways, the first scene is alright, it sets the tone. I can%u2019t tell you all the scenes, because I%u2019d have to write them all ...
Jun 8, 2019 -
Re: Red Rose- A Short Story I wrote a few months back and decided to go back to polish it a bit (Final Edit!)
The story is mysteriously, striking and beautiful and sad. Like a rose. The writing is as delicate and as soft as the petals, the message is as sweet as the ...
Jun 7, 2019 -
Re: Red Rose- A Short Story I wrote a few months back and decided to go back to polish it a bit (Final Edit!)
It%u2019s good to know there are people like you out there- and since you made such a lovely story which made me think (unlike all the shouting and loud characters ...
Jun 7, 2019 -
Re: Lohikarmen: A tale of humans and dragons (Chapter 4: The ritual)
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Jun 7, 2019
I cannot express how impressed I am about this. A plot which moves forwards Characters which develop, share, love, hate, have inner conflicts- basically, characters Even though the setting is ... -
Re: Sognore 4.0
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Jun 6, 2019
Too much action.. Too little exposition.. But who is this story for.. Too puzzling for people my age.. Too action-paced and youngish for adults.. Too out of range for seniors.. ... -
Re: Sognore 4.0
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Jun 6, 2019
Too much action.. Too little exposition.. But who is this story for.. Too puzzling for people my age.. Too action-paced and youngish for adults.. Too out of range for seniors.. ... -
Re: The mansion
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Jun 5, 2019
While not trying to sound harsh, this story looses grip on reality pretty fast. Aye, I know hooks are important- but exposition is just as important. You can’t just take ...