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My notes going through: "My apartment melted away as we played the game. No one noticed until it was too late and there was only a vague outline. Then Timothy ...

This was very interesting... It's a unique way of telling the story, and I liked her childlike language and way of speaking. I noticed lots of exclamation points, but she's ...

This has potential. :) But I think there are a couple things you could do to make it better. I'm not sure about your first few lines. I mean, the ...

Minor confusion. Rejkiv is not her brother, correct? Because he likes(?) our MC's sister (and our MC isn't thrilled about it). Right? Those are the vibes I'm getting right now, ...

Very nice. :) My thoughts going through: For a second I thought the list thing in the first paragraph of things that were going wrong were the two problems besieging ...

I love the first paragraph. XD Hin's whole narrative makes me laugh. I love your style. "the entire space echoing with battering and clacking and the wisps of thread up ...

I enjoyed this immensely. :) Nice job. My notes going through: I understand what you're trying to do with the repeating lines, trying to put them at the beginning and ...

I greatly envy your ability to shade. T-T And make the proper proportions. Your style reminds me a lot of mine, except better. XD The one thing that isn't completely ...

I believe I'm a repeat customer, lol. XD But that's just because Ribbit is awesome, and worthy of return visits. I would love a review of this: It's an entry ...

This is for jasminebell's song prompt contest, and it's based on the song "Rolling in the Deep" by Adele. You can listen to the song here: I rather enjoyed writing ...

"The long grass around me waves slightly in the wind. I imagine that from above it looks like rippling water, but laying in it they just looked like stalks of ...

My entry isn't makin' you doubt anything, lol. :) And since you gave me such a lovely review, I'm going to review your entry in return. ^^ A couple little ...

So, this is my contest entry for the Writer's Roulette contest, and to be honest I'm not really happy with how it turned out. :( Any suggestions you can give ...

Okay, so this is for the official, epic contest where you have to do something from the story generator. I chose to do mine on "Your story is about a ...

I've been joining and lurking writing sites for eons. If this is true, then I have but one question for you. What took you so long to join? XD But ...