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Okay, so I wrote this in like December of 2009, so it's a little older. I've just edited it, cleaning up a few things (2009-Me tried some weird things with ...

I was a member of a different writer's website where I wasn't likin' the atmosphere. It hit me, "Hey! There are other writers' websites out there!" So I think I ...

Hmm... Should the proportions for the front and back covers be the same? Because the way you have it now, it looks like the front cover will be long horizontally, ...

Great tips! I started the editing process on one of my novels, but I've kind of slipped away from it, and now I think I might try to edit one ...

Procrastinating . (Stellar Kart) What's something you'd like to do in the future?

"or the baba'll throw you to the fishes." Ambassador fishes? 8D Something I forgot to say in my last review was how much I like the new information we're getting ...

"Mouths passed and seasons soon changed, with no sigh of Seth since that warm summer night. It was now fall and Alex had spent every night on the roof in ...

"every single time." Every single time what? When more ambassadors come, when she notices his scar, when they part ways? Tua interests me. :) Is his narrative supposed to be ...

I'm seeing a lot of telling in this, along with some passive language. "It was sunset in London." Show us the fading day, and the colors, and the London skyline ...

"I was born in a hospital in Washington," This isn't really something she would remember, is it? She can say it, yeah, but it feels weird to have it right ...

"what it looks like from the inside when a skyscraper is stuck in a cloud." Skyscrapers don't really move, so can they really be stuck? The cloud could be stuck ...

"Now listen closely Elicia, you might enjoy this story. It starts with four little words, as many stories do. Once upon a time." For a first line, I felt like ...

"shooting the two men in the chest" What two men? Did she shoot them both at once, with some sort of weapon that shoots more than one bullet at a ...

As I said in the description, this is a story of mine - almost a year old - that's gotten a lot of positive feedback, even before the edits. It ...

Alright, thanks. ^^ Figured that it was probably okay, but I didn't want to be a... *narrows eyes* Rule breaker. Dun dun DUUUUUUUN... I'll be posting the newer version momentarily. ...