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Yes, we did talk! Lol. XD And part of our discussion made it into my introduction. ;) Point 4, lol. :)

Prolouge should be prologue. XD 'had it's advantages.' its. Aw, they're adorable! >.<

It's not bad in all aspects! This is actually quite intriquing! You've left me wondering if the fantasies she remembered were real or imagined, if her father is REALLY her ...

Not bad... I'm definitely interested... Could use a little polishing, but for the most part this is good. ^^ A few things I noticed: Some punctuation errors... I'd proofread a ...

'shaking form the effort' From. ;) 'cooped within the tiny walls of the city.' Cooped up? Flying with thousand-year old wings? o.o Safety Hazards!!! Love the description of the plane! ...

@ Antigone Cadmus: Favorite Authors? As with music, pretty much too many to name, but... Ted Dekker (

Thanks guys! Lol. ^^ @ wonderingkate: I started going to public school when I was in fifth grade, and as of yesterday (SUMMER VACATION! >..< 1) Any kind, really, as ...

'His most notable feature was how short he was. Despite that he had been leading groups of adventures to Vestige Caverns for years, and was the best at what he ...

Prepare to-- Well, you get the idea. XD Hola. :) Things you should know about me: 1. I am genre-confused. XD I write fantasy and science-fiction, but I've been told ...

I agree with pretty much everything the other commenters said, along with a few suggestions of my own. 'In the days before humans roamed the earth,' What roamed the earth ...

Not bad so far, and I think I'm gonna read more. ^^ I liked how you showed us the characters' personalities right away, and I can't wait to see more ...

I agree with a lot of what LadyKixRox said. I think this story could be good, but it needs some polishing. A little proofreading, a little clarification in some places, ...

@ Dreamer: Roffle! That is kind of funny. XD Four out of five were me-related. >.< @ Elinor Brynn: Oh, thanks hun! You sent me a gift! *hugs* @ Prokaryote: ...

Definitely morbid, but is there really such a thing as 'too' morbid? Morbidness is in the eye of the beholder, I suppose. ;) Yes, it's morbid, but a lot of ...

I had actually heard of young writers society before, I think, and I might have even clicked on the link... But then recently, I searched 'young writers websites' and found ...