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New question: Why were Emaline (like the new name by the way. ;)) and Derek embracing... In the doorway of Mist's room? Would that mean they were in a hallway? ...

Wow. This is really interesting to me... Fantastic premise, although I didn't entirely get exactly how KRATOS was supposed to work/destroy the universe. Maybe I wasn't reading it carefully enough. ...

I like the changes. ^^ Definitely an improvement. There are still a couple things I'm a bit confused about... Still don't know MC's gender, but that could be intentional. Right ...

I've done three so far, I think? I hope to do more after I sleep for a while, lol, but I just got back from summer camp... Am going back ...

'That night was really spooky for people who don't like thunders, lightnings and pouring rain, but to me that night was a beautiful melody.' Unless your main character is like ...

'Wings fluttered and shimmered, outfits sparkled and faces glowed on what everyone, including the bride-to-be, hoped would be her last wedding day.' Loved this. Very nice foreshadowing and context-clu

' my voice shaking with fear. ... I close my eyes in bliss.' He goes from fear to bliss very quickly. o.O This is pretty well written, very intriguing, with ...

For differentiating who's talking: Different fonts? Ah... Oh. Looks like that might not be possible here on YWS. XD

You get Mary Poppins' carpet bag! Congratulations. Now you can carry hatstands and lamps with ease. ^^ *inserts coin*

Alright, thank! ^^ Some afternoon when I'm not too busy (or when I really feel like procrastinating ;)) I'll look at these links more thoroughly. :) Thanks for all the ...

@ Rosey: Sounds cool! I'll try to find a copy if I can. ;) @ Meshugenah: Thanks! ^^ That link looks like it'll be pretty helpful. I'll look through it ...

Rewt: Swim? o.O Azha: We don't have any rivers or swimming pools or anything in Remnant City... We don't know how. :'( I think I'd like to, though! Ro: When ...

XD Are you asking that because Scripps national spelling bee is on? XD Rewt: Um... No. >:| That would require getting up in front of people. And I can't talk ...

Okay, so I love fantasy. And like many fantasy writers, a lot of my fantasy stories take place in medieval-ish times. I also love to read stories set in this ...

Hey! ^^ Welcome to the site! I've been here about a week, and I'm already loving it. ;) I think you will, too. I've never done much fan fiction, except ...