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I really enjoyed this. ^^ My notes going through: "I knew my mum only did it it for the best, but I knew I even repulsed her, my own mother!" ...

I'm excited, too. ^^ I have a really big urge to submit something... But I'm not sure what. Suggestions welcome! 8D

The stuffed moose head exchanged glum looks with his companions – other victims of taxidermy. Or, he would have exchanged glum looks with them, had any of them still been ...

“Something’s missing.” The words slipped past Anya’s lips, not for the first time. Most days, she could keep them buried under other, safer thoughts. But on warm pleasant days like ...

Elai Her brother? Elai couldn't believe it. Though he'd never spoken to her before, he'd seen her around camp, and she'd never let it slip that... that she might have ...

Elai "Zance?" Elai repeated, surprised. A moment later he understood. She was looking for information - probably to pass on to Captain Fairadell. Of course. He should've known it would ...

Elai He blinked, startled, as the woman spoke to him, a half-eaten apple in her hand. Was that all she'd come in for? A sort of cringing feeling overtook him ...

Elai Elai pushed away the thoughts of Ani, and slipped past the quarreling soldiers to the mess tent, brushing shoulders with a dark-haired woman on his way in. What's her ...

I read through this pretty quickly, so I don't have much to specifically point out... But this was really good! Oodles better than part one, which was pretty good to ...

Elai shrugged his shoulders, trying to get the simple white armor he wore to fit more comfortably. It was so different from the Dread Army's elaborate black get-ups... He still ...

Name: Elai Age: 18 Fights for: The Passerby Army. History: Recently joined, formerly was in the Dread Army (friends with Ani). Switched sides after being captured and brought before the ...

Wondering how a fantasy storybook can be inspired by an amazing Christian band? Well, this is how: In the lining of Flyleaf's CD, "Momento Mori", where the lyrics usually appear, ...

o.O That's it?! No! I want more! It was so good! DX Seriously, really great description, great start to a story, and I really want to know what happens. T-T ...

I would like to politely disagree with formertywcwriter. I don't think you need to make it too obvious they're in the future from the very beginning. Part of the fun ...