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Re: Siren's Call
This is a rather intriguing start. My only real nitpicks: "I specialize in most instruments." Maybe this is just another part of the quirky humor you have going on here, ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Runner, the strategist and the Outcast
"The other sat on the floor, gazing dreamily up at the large wall in front of her. She had strange hair, which seemed to simmer in thousands of different colours. ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Meaning of a Username (Musings about 'silent' pages)
Thanks, guys. ^^ And yeah, I think I probably will be posting it on my blog at some point... But I was basically just trying to capture all the stuff ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Meaning of a Username (Musings about 'silent' pages)
At a glance, my username doesn’t make much sense. At least when in reference to me, as a person. Whether it’s in real life or online, I tend to ramble. ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: What books should I buy?
FAIL. My computer keeps booting me to another page and making me lose everything I've written!!! ANGRY CAPS ABUSE OF ANGER!!! *ahem* To summarize everything I lost: Already read Uglies, ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: What books should I buy?
After winning the $30 dollar Amazon gift card (and bragging rights) from Trident's three-pronged writing contest with a little story-ish thing about a lawn gnome who might show up in ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Could there be life on a planet if...
If the seasons didn't change? In my other-worldly fantasy novel, there's a race of people who live up in the mountains and there are big rebel groups who - as ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: So You Want to Write a Novel?
YES. I saw this on Aly Carter's blog, posted it on my YWS blog... I think every writer/wannabe writer needs to see this. XD
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: The Way Things Are
A good start... My notes going through: "... more about the Test way more than you!" After 'test', there should be some kind of punctuation. If they pass the castle ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Alice
Your thrashing has arrived, sir. *salutes* My notes going through: "As it’s been a long time" - Tense issue? Should be 'as it had been a long time' or something ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: A Resignation (For Three-Pronged Contest)
Past this point, this story has been edited, taking into consideration the reviews. Also, I think I fixed the POV issue, which previously resulted from me not realizing that it ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: A Resignation (For Three-Pronged Contest)
Feedback por favor! ~ To the humans in this community: Every summer, for as long as they can remember, the Gregor family has enjoyed sweet, juicy slices of watermelon fresh ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
Rest assured, you'll be receiving either a sci-fi or a fantasy short story submission from me. ^^ I just have to decide what to enter... When you say we have ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Books that were made into GOOD movies
I enjoyed Series of Unfortunate Events, but I actually saw that before I read the books, so... XD I really love the movie for City of Ember, but it can't ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Deep Magic Part 1
In an effort to procrastinate NaNoWriMo, I decided to review something! ^^ This wasn't bad. My notes going through: "Stella was extremely glad for having a small chest, making it ...
Nov 20, 2010
