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Re: YWS Handout (for contest)
Kay, so I did this in like an hour... Simple... And unless anybody has any major suggestions, this is probably how it's going to be entered in the contest. XD ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Nature art!!
I absolutely love the first one. All of them are good. But the first one? Wow.
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Anything But Normal~Chapter One, Part One
Interesting! A little short, as others have said, but it's a good introduction to the rest, and it's a good way to show us this power of hers... Some errors ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons - 1
Excellent! XD As other people have already said, the narrative is enjoyable. The dragon's character really comes through in the voice. Always a good thing. I liked how he compared ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The Gods play Marbles
An interesting story. :) I liked the comparison of T. Rex to a mumbling homeless man... Are their eyeballs really only the size of tennis balls? o.O Remember to start ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Subject 30
I really liked this. :) There were some errors in places that'll be an easy fix. Just proofread a little more (or have someone else proofread with more detail for ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Book cover. O.o
Pretty good. ^^ And may I just say? LOVE GIMP.
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Griffinkeeper is awesome!
Go Griff! 8D
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Tesseract - Chapter 1
This is an alright start, but I think there are some things that you could do to make it even better. "I heard a loud crash when it made contact ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: The Observatory
An interesting set of topics... Really makes you think about what you're posting online. There are just a couple of things that I think could make it even better. FIRST ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Headphones
This definitely wasn't bad, and I get the sentiment behind it - I love music too... However, what cost you the most points in the contest was that, it was ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Spider Silk story map thing
Oh boy... You know, posting this could actually be great motivation, because now people actually are looking forward to reading it. XD *vows to get a few chapters ready for ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Spider Silk story map thing
Lol, thanks guys. ^^ Nice to know you have so much confidence in me when I haven't even posted anything of this novel on here yet. XD And yeah, I'm ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Spider Silk story map thing
This is what I did for about four hours that I could've spent actually rewriting this novel. XD That said, I've VERY pleased with how this turned out! ^^ It ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Empty Sky
Thanks everybody, lol. At the moment, I don't think I'm writing any more of this... Maybe it'll pop up in a novel someday, but at the moment I'm happy with ...
Feb 16, 2011
