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Yup, I think old fairy-tales are definitely a promising route to go on for this. ^^ Anyway. When I was younger I went through a telepathy/astral projection phase that was... ...

Thanks, lol. ^^ That's a pretty good list of alledgedly questionable literature. XD I don't think I'm morbid... But things I write turn out creepier than I mean them to. ...

I did indeed. XD I'd heard the quote before, and it seemed appropriate. ^^ What's proper, though, when quoting a fictional character? Attributing it to the character, or the author, ...

[This was originally posted on my for-serious writing blog, here. Feel free to click around. ^^ ] It might sound simple at first. There are certain actions that would not ...

"The cold night air raced past me as we moved against each other." Who's 'We'? Her and the night air, or is there another person present? "I was falling from ...

"Arthur awoke the next morning, his alarm clock blaring." Since we've changed perspectives, it sounds a bit odd to say 'the next morning'. I think you could just as well ...

Not a bad start. ^^ My notes going through: Most people would turn around when they hear a scream... You say that Drew doesn't because he knows what's happening already, ...

And I think I might be around this time! But I might still be camping... o_o Uh... I'll figure it out. ^^

It's a good description... But it's just that. A description. Is this for a contest or something, where it needs to be 150 words? Because otherwise, I would suggest expanding ...

Nah, it's fine. XD I just figured I'd spread the word, just in case.

Not sure if this is the right place for this (Mods, feel free to move it or whatever) but I figured I'd post a warning. There's a scam that's been ...

Alas... T-T I will be gone, at a theme park, riding roller coasters... *sigh*

"Behind the mist my breath makes on the glass, the colours of the dress blur together; pink and white silk and lace trimmings smearing like the paints in a watercolour." ...

Dude. I love this song. XD My notes going through: "Maybe I would’ve managed today too if it weren’t for the fact that I’d done the same for the past ...

Ooooh! I hadn't even considered original fairy tales! Some can actually be pretty disturbing, yet the names and stuff would be familiar enough for a reader to catch the allusion... ...