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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: He-Man: Burden of a Hero Chapter 1

    Hi there.... This is quiet accelerating. I'm so far liking every part of the soon to master piece. As the previous comment, my faviourate part is: "Also, the power He-Man ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Harry Potter has changed my life.

    Wow this is amazing. I feel exactly the way you do. You've capture my experience and put into words. I have not yet watched the final movie. I am highly ...

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: LOst....

    Well this is a great effort. I like how you've incorporated a lot into something so small. This is a good start but try to make things a bit longer ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: I Never Gave Up

    Hi guys this is just a remake of Matt's Different Life. I read all your comments and improved the areas that needed improvement. Please comment and judge. :D I Never ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Morning Dew (Chapters 1 & 2)

    Hi I'm going to review your great piece of work. I did feel that this was great to read but I just wasn't glued to my table. I felt like ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Theory of Parallelism - Chapter 1 [Edit 1]

    This so too good. I agree with all that is said here. All I can say is keep reading and writing and write more to this because I want to ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: What Do You Think?

    This is amazing. It's just so different and fresh. I can't believe that I am reading this, because it's just so great. I wall review one of my favorite paragraphs. ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Breaking Free

    I have to say that that was pretty dam good. Not much to say was bad. SO just keep writing!

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Matts Different Life

    It all started at the age of 15, we entered Australia after we left our war- torn country, Iraq. My name is Matt King and I’ve moved in from my ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: My Terrifying Experince

    My Terrifying Experience Falling leaves were scattered all over the muddy wet floor. Towering trees swayed from side to side as the wind gushed past them. The visibility was dangerously ...

    Apr 19, 2011


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