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Re: Beneath the Smile
I love it!!!!!! I know how it feels to be that girl the praticed actress whom know one really knows. No one bothers to actually lift the mask. To see ...
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Re: Who Knew?
I liked your expression and emotion throughout your piece. I loved th eway you used italic for words you wanted to stand out. only thing I would change is at ...
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Re: Here I Am
I am here, you are there. I wish there was more to what we share. We are best friends. Yet, I find myself wanting you . The smiles you give ...
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Re: hey you! over there!
You could use a little bit of help on the capitalization, spelling and word placement. However your mind is in the right place, taking real life experiances and expressing them ...
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Re: He
I can most definitely relate to this. I know all Him and I see the other people but no one else compares. You are an amazing writer and I love ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Solstice
I love all the detail you used it was so amazing and visual I could picture every detail. I wish I could write like you do. That was amazing!!! I ...
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Re: Into The Mystics
-Does love always win out in he end? Can it defeat Evil or will it help it prevail? Into The Mystics Chapter one: The Unexpected “You have to fight it ...
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Re: Blue Boy
Ok so question...would it make it more interesting if I started with a flash back? Ben's story before he meets christi? It's more exciting...he loses his mom when a gas ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Blue Boy
Yeah I seriously stink when it comes to punctuation/commas whatever. Thanks for your reply. I know it needs editing...I'm just not the greatest one for it if you know what ...
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Re: Then Came the Ghosts
I liked the fact that this writing had a flow. The words lead into each other and the overall pieace was really great
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Re: Blue Boy
Blue Boy Christi was a very nice person but nobody not even her truest friends could see she was lonely and sad no one seemed to see the sad girl ...
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Re: Tell Me I'm A Wreck.
Are you actually British? or do you just like to write that way? - I like you story line but you could do a little more explaining about the individual ...
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Re: What I Wish I'd Know Sooner
all of that stuff is true I have learned several of those things out the hard way.
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Re: The darkness of my closet
I love it u should finish it so i can read all of it :) and u better finish it buddy!!!
Apr 17, 2011