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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cat's Cradle

    Very very good so far but just a few mistakes Nestled deep within the warm straw, a young female was cured into a ball, her belly large It should be ...

    Jul 7, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Year of 2089

    This is very good except a few errors “Cool, my name is Claire. What’s ours?”To the United States because the leader of North Korea took to much control and torture ...

    Jul 7, 2008


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury