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Re: A small series of Autumn themed haiku
I love the first two! Also, I really like your use of imagery throughout the pieces. In the Halloween one and the chill breezes one (numbers four and six), the ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: poetry scraps
Deep in crystal blue pools I see A brutal-barren stillenacht Shards of crystalline Cold-shattered glass Scattered in sharp relief Across a starless sky Psychedelic, heartbreaking hues Blend into each
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir
As another victim of sexual abuse, I am very, very sorry for your experience. Sexual abuse is an ugly thing, and can leave scars that are far too often permanent. ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: Lullaby
I love the rhythm to this piece! And I think the line breaks are ok, but I might vary them up a bit- it's such beautiful language that you don't ...
Jul 22, 2008 -
Re: hi!
hey yall, i'm new to this community and just wanted to say hi! i'm looking forward to reading a lot of your writing, and maybe getting feedback on mine :)
Jul 22, 2008
