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  • Lyric Poetry Re: A small series of Autumn themed haiku

    I love the first two! Also, I really like your use of imagery throughout the pieces. In the Halloween one and the chill breezes one (numbers four and six), the ...

    Jul 23, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: poetry scraps

    Deep in crystal blue pools I see A brutal-barren stillenacht Shards of crystalline Cold-shattered glass Scattered in sharp relief Across a starless sky Psychedelic, heartbreaking hues Blend into each

    Jul 22, 2008
  • General Articles Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir

    As another victim of sexual abuse, I am very, very sorry for your experience. Sexual abuse is an ugly thing, and can leave scars that are far too often permanent. ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Lullaby

    I love the rhythm to this piece! And I think the line breaks are ok, but I might vary them up a bit- it's such beautiful language that you don't ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: hi!

    hey yall, i'm new to this community and just wanted to say hi! i'm looking forward to reading a lot of your writing, and maybe getting feedback on mine :)

    Jul 22, 2008


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