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shloka19

shloka19

  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]

    9/10

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Other Re: Life

    I really, really like this piece. The only problem I saw was the spacing, but that's easy to fix. I especially love the analogy of art that you used. I ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Dream

    I really like this poem; its short and sweet but gets the point across just as well. I also like the feeling of waking-up-from-an-absolutely-awesome-dream-and-regretting-it-later that you are trying t

    Oct 26, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A Matter of Choice

    Thank you so much for the review, klotrox16... though i didn;t write the poem- it was by Charles Bukowski. My essay was to comment on it; I put it there ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A Matter of Choice

    A Matter of Choice Throughout history, different species have dominated the earth for different periods of time, and their rise and fall have been well documented. The reign of earth ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter One- yet to be named

    Hey! I really like your piece- the characters seem real, and I love, love, love dystopian fiction. We were both simply beading about the bush. I think you meant to ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Sea and me

    Hey! I love this poem, as always :P The sea is behind me, And I need to get there. I think it would clear up the confusion if you replaced ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Other Re: Essay on Harrison Bergeron

    This is the link to the short story- incase someone wants to read it to comment. Thank you!

    Sep 26, 2011
  • Other Re: Essay on Harrison Bergeron

    The Egalitarian Society- Utopia or Dystopia? The world created by Kurt Vonnegut in the short story “Harrison Bergeron” is based on the belief that the main cause of discord, and ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Other Re: Essay on Harrison Bergeron

    The Egalitarian Society- Utopia or Dystopia? The world created by Kurt Vonnegut in the short story “Harrison Bergeron” is based on the belief that the main cause of discord, and ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Other Re: Essay on Harrison Bergeron

    Thank you both so very much for your reviews! captaindomdude, the assigment was to do a textual analysis of "Harrison Bergeron" by Kurt Vonnegut (in MLA format) for my college ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Other Re: Essay on Harrison Bergeron

    The short story “Harrison Bergeron” by Kurt Vonnegut exemplifies what strong beliefs can make humans do and where this, in turn, can lead society to. The creators of this society ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Hope

    I really like this poem and it reminded me of the little girl we saw in Gandhi Ashram- I know you don't rememebr her but here's my impression of her ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Death

    The *insert petname or name whichever here* Surprise surprise! I finally joined this site... nice surprise no? Anyways, I loovvvvveeeee all your poems and you know it! So that's my ...

    Sep 24, 2011
  • Other Re: Essay on "Harrison Bergeron"

    The short story “Harrison Bergeron” by Kurt Vonnegut exemplifies what strong beliefs can make humans do and where this, in turn, can lead society to. The creators of this society ...

    Sep 24, 2011


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