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Re: World as an Illusion
@HaydenSmith, I completely agree with you. I'm a Hindu and an astronomy major myself. I'm not against a person having a scientific outlook and religious faith simultaneously. I'm just against ...
Apr 22, 2012 -
Re: World as an Illusion
Thank you! My conclusion is that it's possible that science and faith may be reconciled one day and we could use one for justification of another. But until that day ...
Apr 20, 2012 -
Re: World as an Illusion
I created this video for my English 102 class. I'm basically using the issue of the Holographic universe to argue against drawing hasty conclusions and integrating faith and science in ...
Apr 20, 2012 -
Re: Conditional Probablity
So this is a conditional probability question that is giving me a really hard time: This is a sequence, and its contingency table: C C C C C B C ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: I am a waterfall
This is simply beautiful. I really, really like how you've structured it to sort of look like the waterfall. The imagery and metaphors are perfect. One nitpick though~ I flow ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Hi! I just did a review of an essay in General articles but didn't get any points for it. Time of Incident (include your timezone): 8:06 MST Browser: Firefox Page ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Tim Burton Style Analysis
Hey! So I really liked your essay, clearly you've put in much thought behind it. Just a few nitpicks~ Cinematic techniques help a movie become more entertaining therefore everyone uses ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 2
Hey dogs! I've never reviewed something of yours before, so here goes nothing. Nitpicks~ At 5:00 PM exactly, he stepped out of the car and told his chauffer to go ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Reflection
Ok so this is a reflection essay we had to do for my college Eng101 class. We had to talk about how our writing improved throughout the semester and also ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Novels
Hi NiNLove, I really like your poem... And I totally agree with you--novels can have an almost out-of-this-world pull. Anyways, I think you can make it easier for the reader ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Natural Anthem
Love If My heart were a house!
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: YWS Secret Santa
1.Favourite colours: Bluee--midnight and teal :D 2.Favourite activities: Reading, reading, and more reading. I'd prefer books over movies any day ;) Lovee to read dystopian. Love to read poetry too...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Superficial Perception
This is an essay I wrote for my college English 101 class. Its a contextual analysis of "The Yellow Wallpaper" by Charlotte Perkins Gilman. For those of you interested, here's ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Once Upon A Wish
Hey! I really liked this piece, it was sweet, especially the singing part. Nitpicks~ I can't understand your mind I think this sounds a bit off... maybe you could rephrase ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Type Your Username With Your Elbow
Here goes.. shloka`19 Yay! Not bad... except for the apostrophe. :P
Nov 14, 2011
