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shloka19

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  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: World as an Illusion

    @HaydenSmith, I completely agree with you. I'm a Hindu and an astronomy major myself. I'm not against a person having a scientific outlook and religious faith simultaneously. I'm just against ...

    Apr 22, 2012
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: World as an Illusion

    Thank you! My conclusion is that it's possible that science and faith may be reconciled one day and we could use one for justification of another. But until that day ...

    Apr 20, 2012
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: World as an Illusion

    I created this video for my English 102 class. I'm basically using the issue of the Holographic universe to argue against drawing hasty conclusions and integrating faith and science in ...

    Apr 20, 2012
  • Homework Help Re: Conditional Probablity

    So this is a conditional probability question that is giving me a really hard time: This is a sequence, and its contingency table: C C C C C B C ...

    Jan 27, 2012
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I am a waterfall

    This is simply beautiful. I really, really like how you've structured it to sort of look like the waterfall. The imagery and metaphors are perfect. One nitpick though~ I flow ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Hi! I just did a review of an essay in General articles but didn't get any points for it. Time of Incident (include your timezone): 8:06 MST Browser: Firefox Page ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Tim Burton Style Analysis

    Hey! So I really liked your essay, clearly you've put in much thought behind it. Just a few nitpicks~ Cinematic techniques help a movie become more entertaining therefore everyone uses ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 2

    Hey dogs! I've never reviewed something of yours before, so here goes nothing. Nitpicks~ At 5:00 PM exactly, he stepped out of the car and told his chauffer to go ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Reflection

    Ok so this is a reflection essay we had to do for my college Eng101 class. We had to talk about how our writing improved throughout the semester and also ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Novels

    Hi NiNLove, I really like your poem... And I totally agree with you--novels can have an almost out-of-this-world pull. Anyways, I think you can make it easier for the reader ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Other Re: Natural Anthem

    Love If My heart were a house!

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Secret Santa

    1.Favourite colours: Bluee--midnight and teal :D 2.Favourite activities: Reading, reading, and more reading. I'd prefer books over movies any day ;) Lovee to read dystopian. Love to read poetry too...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Superficial Perception

    This is an essay I wrote for my college English 101 class. Its a contextual analysis of "The Yellow Wallpaper" by Charlotte Perkins Gilman. For those of you interested, here's ...

    Nov 27, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Once Upon A Wish

    Hey! I really liked this piece, it was sweet, especially the singing part. Nitpicks~ I can't understand your mind I think this sounds a bit off... maybe you could rephrase ...

    Nov 27, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Type Your Username With Your Elbow

    Here goes.. shloka`19 Yay! Not bad... except for the apostrophe. :P

    Nov 14, 2011


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