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Re: Don't Forget - Chapter 2
( P.S. I still need to fix the format of the dialogue, so please ignore that! All comments are appreciated :smt001 ) Chapter 2 I was genuinely sad to feel ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Don't Forget
Prologue I closed my eyes. The sun was just about to dip its toes into the vast, sparkling ocean. I dug my hands deep into the sand until they reached ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Every Star
Maybe a look, perhaps a smile That makes my heart sing and dance and wonder What I did to deserve you. You are the sparkle in my eyes, the joy ...
Aug 4, 2011 -
Re: Counting the Minutes
Thank you both very much for your criticisms, I really appreciate them! @MamaLama95 I agree about the stop-and-starty lines....I'll definitely work on that! @Deanie thank you very much. This poem ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Counting the Minutes
I look around. There's so many people. So many strangers. I count the minutes until I can go home. Then I see you. You stand out. You turn around and ...
Jul 12, 2011
