shelbell

So far I like it. It's interesting. I like how you ended it alot. A few things though. You're missing commas in places. Also quotes should be in double marks, ...

Great story. I liked your descriptions of the scenarios alot. I do agree with the others about the narration, but I like it. I add something to the story. The ...

I really like this so far. I agree with what the other reviewer said about the confusing part when it flips from Kate and Trey talking to Trey on the ...

Hey again everyone, First thanks for making me feel welcome. This place seems pretty chill. I write some poetry. Not all of it is meant to be shared since a ...

I'm not so good at the grammer thing, but I did see what most of the other people saw. But I don't want to repeat it so I'll just skip ...

Hi there! Obvously I'm new here.... Um...I don't really know what to say here. I'm a 16 year old female. My cousin (I think thats how we are related...) showed ...