shelbell

Wow. I really liked it. I liked how it was brought full circle. I've reread it mulitple times, but am still kind of speechless about the ending... Um...what to say ...

6 Months Later The warm early June air lifts my hair off my shoulders. The weather is perfect; just warm enough to fee like summer, but cool enough to not ...

I liked it. It was short, but a good set up for the story. I like the description of the snow and of the boy. It was the kind of ...

Hey everyone, Thanks for all the reviews. They totally helped when I edited it again. I just posted the edited version. I made a good amount of changes based on ...

Hey girl, Another interesting part of the story. I felt this was more a filler to get to the next part, but I understand that. It was short so I ...

Here is chapter two of "The Firsts". I'm not sure if I got this part right so feel free to rip it apart. I'll be editing the first part soon. ...

I liked it. The end was so cute. I thought you transitioned well between the flashbacks and real time very nicely. The description you had in here was good too. ...

Hey girl, First off, way to tell me you had something new up! I had to find it for myself! *Scoff* :P I'm just kidding with you. On to the ...

I like it. It felt really real. I can't wait to read more! A few things... There were a some run on sentences/ awkward phrasings. Yet you are not reading ...

Hey girl, So I'm behind, you'll know the reason and story when you read the pm, but I just read your other chapter too. I'm gunna review this one since ...

I like the idea of the poem. The way you structured is good. However, sometimes the lack of rhyme scheme makes the end of the poem hard to read. It ...

This is the first 'chapter' in my series called "The Firsts". I guess they are more like vingettes (think House on Mango Street ) instead of chapters. They will each ...

Once again Curlyqpride, I like it. It's interesting. I can kind of see where its going, yet want to see where you take it. Your description was really great, especally ...

It's interesting. The overall story left me wonderingg what happened to the girl's father/ family and everything about the boy. I liked it. I can't wait to read more. But ...

I like it so far. While the plot seems to be your typical run of the mill teen love story so far, I'm still interested in seeing where it goes. ...