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sheepy.shoo

  • Other Poetry Re: Paint

    oooh... I loved it, especially the parts with the canvas similies ( I paint ^^) . It really gave me the feeling of happy love. At the end it slowed ...

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Lost You

    I like your poem very much, and agree with my predecessor on all accounts. I don't know if you have really been in this situation or if you just wrote ...

    Dec 17, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: alone

    hmm... I'm just too illogical! xxD :smt020

    Dec 15, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: he loves her-she doesnt love him - the usual

    please comment! and if you don't like it, tell me, but please don't hurt my feelings it takes me ages to get over that kinda thing... :cry: its not enough ...

    Dec 14, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: alone

    Yes, I know, a bit gloomy. Well, I dont mean to write like that, it just comes out. I hope aslike comes under authors licence, I couldnt find a fitting ...

    Dec 14, 2008


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