sheepy.shoo

~Melody~ Melody stared around in wonder. She could have sworn the hall had held nothing more than dust mites - until a moment ago. Now it all sparkled, shined. It ...

okee, I know it disrupts the flow, but I live too far away from the big temple, and my parents don't know about my secret wish, so I have to ...

Awwww menno. I was going to do you a nice review on this saying how good I found it, and then I saw that the profis had all written things ...

Okaaaay. I aggree with everything it says up there. But since I'm no great writer, I can`t give you a review I'm really sure of. My advice is: get yourself ...

Mwahahahahahahah god I've got a stomach ache! Yeah, I luved twilight for a while, but so did I harry Potter^^. Anyhoo I'm over it. But I still find J.K Rowlings ...

Profile- Name:Melody Age: (13-25) 13 Gender: (try to keep it 3 and 3) female Personality:I am quiet but full of ideas. I had a hard time where I come from, ...

Hey Rosey, your story is great! I was just browsing through yws searching for something proper to review. Looks like I found it!^^ There are still a few things that ...

Okay, I kinda liked it, but there are some problems... I find you should dense up the lines. Even if you wrote to induce a feeling of airiness, I kinda ...

The moon shepherdess slarlight, starbright sheep of the moon thy wool on a spool of thy shepherdess lady she wears her hair open braided with stars her dress she laced ...

Weel, I really liked it. Everything I noticed was said, so I just want to say how good I found it! ^^ ~sheepy

Yes, I really like it, but I find some things quite confusing as well: “Do you know what time it is?” “It’s nearly seven o’ clock sir.” here, if I ...

Thanks everyone for your reviews, I've edited this, and written a little bit more to it. Could you take a look at it for me please? thanks At the start ...

I was stuck on a motorbike and traveling at a human pace! you probably mean travelling I retorted. I can more then handle myself this is than Why couldn’t the ...

I still really like it, but perhaps you could work over it a bit more. I stood outside the rotten, iron gate looking into the old, abandoned manor. It had ...

I found it really great! Although it does remind me a bit of twilight, but so, I loved twilight ^^. I hope this gets somewhere, because I'm going to stay ...