sharitm2

Hi, my name is Evalina and I'm a ghost. :shock:

He kissed her and walked away.

There's a 50% chance that the next person who reads this post who has, has had or will have head lice has skipped school in the last week :P

Hey everyone, this is a preface to the novel that i have started writing. I hope you guys enjoy and I hope you can give me some constructive criticism. (: ...

Hey great story (: I feel like you could have improved the first few lines though, because they didn't hook me on to the story as well as they could ...

Excellent work, it was a joy to read (: I was definitely hooked to this story from the very beginning. You're style of writing is very nice and the imagery ...

Tears That hadn’t been shed in years, Lies That hadn’t been realized, Time Ticking away with each chime, Rain Teeming down my window pane, Memories Buzzing round like bumblebees, Music ...

Hey, The poem was pretty good, and your word choice and rhyming were great, but the rhythm was varying throughout the poem. Also, the last line didn't fit witht he ...

Hey there, I really loved this poem and how descriptive it was. The images that you had running through my head were very clear. There's only one part that detached ...

Hey there, I really loved this poem and how descriptive it was. The images that you had running through my head were very clear. There's only one part that detached ...

Hey everyone, this is just a poem about the hardships that a girl who is from the ocean shore has to face when she moves to the big city. Hope ...

I absolutely loved this story (: I haven't ever read anything written in the second person form that sounded so beautiful. The images of everything you were trying to communicate ...

Hi, Great poem! I absolutely love depressing poetry about love and life in general and this poem really enchanted me (: One thing was that you fell of track with ...

Hi, Great poem! I absolutely love depressing poetry about love and life in general and this poem really enchanted me (: One thing was that you fell of track with ...

Hi there, What a great poem! i love the mysteriousness of it (: My favorite line is "once upon a december, memories dim as a dying ember" Excellent job with ...