shanan-cat

TickledPink, you can't just give a review that only has three words: I liked it. That's not a review. Do you know what a review is? It's where you give ...

I loved it boy! Liked the rhyming my friend and all the nicely written lines there. Keep up the good work! shanan-cat!

I think that you should have made it longer. I didn't really have a good ending. It just kind of stopped, you know? Maybe try something like this: His hair ...

Liked the poem but thought that it was a bit rough when you repeated the phrases over and over again. It got a bit annoying. I liked the way that ...

I'm sorry but I can't read this just because it's too long and way too wide. Maybe you should edit it and then I can read it, okay? shanan-cat!

The poem was well thought out but it is commonly used on this site... unfortunately. [quote] And so, though my heart shatters (this is what you wrote) And now what ...

Hey Vivi! The story... was... amazing! I loved all the adjectives that you used, but there where a few typos? clogging me senses I think that it's my senses, right? ...

Loved it! Nice rhyming my girl (or boy)! Lke the actual poem! Good job! shanan-cat!

Hello again! I just wanted to say, emo_dude100, this is not a review. To review, you have to actually give the person that wrote the poem your opinoin of the ...

HI! It was interesting, but kind of weird at the same time. I think it would have been better if you had rhymed each line with the other, It might ...

Hey, Cade! Love your pic! Thanks for the comment on my hat! You are all so pretty... wish I was..shanan-cat!

I'm sorry, friend, but I can't critique this 'cause it's way tooooo long and it would take forever to do a good review. I agree with BBB and BF, shorten ...

Just so you know, there's supposed to be space between each dialogue. There should be a "... this person said" after each piece of dialogue, so we don't get mixed ...

You're only eleven! How are you on this site? Your not allowed unless your thirteen or older you know? Anyways, back to the review... I liked your poem, it has ...

Nicely done my good friend! Love the idea, the rhyming and everything else too! Had nice roll to it, and the fact that you used that word (lincome?) in every ...