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Re: Done
Very dramatic, but nicely done! I have nothing to say, but can I print this?
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Fear.
That was pretty awesome, but you had a few grammar mistakes... You are always with us. You reveal are darkest nightmares. There should be a semi-colone or a comma here, ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: The Up
Thanks! That's awesome how you think that what I wrote was cute! Thanks for the idea too, will consider it! Shanan-cat out!
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: The Up
Sorry abou the sparkle thing! I change it when I find the time. Thanks for all your help! Shananners! :lol:
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: Simply As That
Dude, that was AWESOME! The originality was somethingout of the question! (is that how you spell it?) Keep on writing, Shananners!
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: The Up
Thanks for all the reviews! I will correct all my typos and maybe change it a bit. Thanks again! Shananners!
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: Dejection
Nicely done my friend! shanan-cat!
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: The Up
The up Up and up and up we go, into the sky where appears a show! The moon will sparkle and the sun may shine. The stars can gleam, they're ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Tree
I liked that one! The creativity of people on this site is amazing! Where did you get this waesome idea? I have no problems with this, so carry on! Shananers!
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Food
I don't get it... Please clarafy shanan-cat
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: ..
This isn't a poem... What did you write?
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Dreamed of Hell
Oh! I get it now! Thanks for clearing it! Shanan-cat!
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: appraoching storm
Thanks for the okay! shanan-cat!
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: A dark dream I had
I love the poem but you had a few grammar mistakes. Midnight eyes that stare, No need for a capital "m" here. A heart and hard as stone. I don't ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: To all new YWS members!
Anybody going to reply here?!
Apr 7, 2008
