shanan-cat

Hi! Haven't seen you cool monkey swing the smooth branch in along time! O.k, now to the review... I liked the way you put the story into a diary and ...

Hi! I liked your story, and I think it was original. I don't know why so many people do so many long reviews. It's pointless!\ Anyways I liked your story. ...

The literature door swung open and a heart shaped woman with long black hair, tall slender frame and small breasts. This line doesn't make sense because you said it without ...

I'm sorry, but it wasn't very good and I think it was toooooo much spacing. Also, you should ahve continued it and had put more sentences instead of alot of ...

I said that I would review your post, so here i am. The spacing was really well put out, and the only thing that really bugged me was when use ...

ALEXANDRA!!! SPACING! SPACING! SPACING! What is wrong with you?!?! And you MUST capitilize ALL your "I"'s ! I know that you can do way better that this! It was a ...

Thanks for the advice! Hopefully, I'll manage to get around to retyping it with more of point and ahve it be less cliche,k? and thanks for the review! shanan-cat!

Ok, let us get started. I'm not going t write a really long reply like the others, but I will comment. The following things were really well planned: -story line; ...

Sex does sell but why are you guys talking about his? It's absurd!

WOW!!! That was truly amazing! The rhyming was out of this world and the poem itself was very true indeed, although I think that you have continued a little more ...

Thanks for all the replies guys and I will use your advice in a most respected way. shanan-cat

Hi, "proks", I liked the idea of the story and really all the neat words that you came up with; like "petit" and so forth. lay out was good and ...

I try so fucking hard sometimes That I forget that I’m alive. [q]why do you use swearing? Its not really helping your poem you know. Standing on a ledge and ...

Just so you know this is quite a weird story and i was made up from the top if my head, so if it's bad, then it's because I did ...

I have a few problems with your story: 1. there's no stiry line (like snoink said) 2. THERE ARE NO PARAGRAPHS. why? (hehehehehehehe!) :lol: you really need to rewrite this ...