shanan-cat

Hey girl! Totally loved the poem! But I'd like it better if you had mad it longer, you know? It was still good though! Keep it up! shanan-cat!

Hey Jared, I liked your story, but I had a few problems: [quote] They’re always talking and never listen In this sentence, "listen" should be "listening". You also don't tell ...

This is the continuation of chapter one, and I know it's really bad, so don't be mean about it, o.k? thanks, shanan-cat! was Mick. Mick was a fourteen, short brown ...

Nice pic's, but where's the color? You have to have color! shanan-cat! (hehehehehehe)

I loved this poem! It gad quite a bit of emotion to it. I liked the idea an the words you used to describe it. Very well thought and a ...

Um... see, I didn't really like it because it didn't make me feel what you're feeling. You also didn't put capital "I's" anywhere in you poem. You must remember that, ...

Once again, I don't have anything wrong with your work and I think that even though you only checked it once, it was good enough for me! Keep it up, ...

Nice title! Good work! He wasn't only a man He was my man I don't think that this was a good opening sentence. It didn't really catch too much of ...

This piece really interested me. I liked they way you ahd a good idea and put it to good use. Please make all the beginings of your sentences capitals. It's ...

Why so many long posts? I liked it as I do al of your posts, but the fact that people do so many long things like this drives me nuts!!! ...

I like the idea, but it's a bit cliché, a lot of people use these kind of stories and now it's getting kind of old. You also forgot to capitilize ...

Give me more of this 'cause I like! You good and I like the end, although it was weird. shanan-cat! Rock your world!

This story has to do with the events that my good friend has been through. The actual events have been modified ALOT. Hope you enjoy... shanan-cat! He stood there, wind ...

I only had one problem with your story, if it is a poem I think that it should at least have verses, like after every four lines or so, you ...

Hi again! Just Close Your Eyes Just close your eyes I don't like the fact that you repeated the line. it bothers me a lot! Change it. To see the ...