shanan-cat

I had afew problems with your poem: [quote]but something inside of me won't. This line doesn't make sense. Maybe something like: But something inside won't let me part, for i ...

I liked it. Reminded me of a song that has zip to it. It was a fun little poem, but I couldn't guess what it was, sorry. Maybe the moon? ...

Thought that it was interesting, but kind of lost me at the end... Who killed who and why such the sudden entry into the story? You didn't really give us ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! *going to edit it and then post again* shanan-cat!

I liked it! It's better than anything that I could do! Liked the second the best, then the third, then finally the first. Your good my ols friend! shanan-cat! :smt026 ...

Hi again! I liked your poem, it really touched me with nice words. The only thing that I didn't like was the fact that you had a weird ending. It ...

This a most recent pic with and my hat... AGAIN! balakiki! shanan-cat!

No offence buddy, but his is not a poem. It's not relvant to anything, and there's no real emotion to it. I think that you should have actually editedit and ...

Thanks for the all the reviews! Chapter two will be here, hopefully, Friday! shanan-cat!

Liked the description, but thought it was a bit too short.

Hey Paw! Loved your poem, showed your true colors. Liked the idea! Nothing wrong here! PM me sometime k? shanan-cat! *leaves a pawprint*

This is a picture of me just a few seconds ago. I know that I'm ugly, but hat's okay, you can laugh and hate me forever, I don't care! (and ...

I didn't really like it because it didn't really have much point to it... I'm really sorry. The end wasn't very good, no offence, and the fact that all you're ...

I liked your poem, but I thought that it was a bit tooo short. It didn't really have a good ending, nice rhyming though! If you made it longer you ...

Like Snoink said, Grammar is important, make sure you review it before you post it, k? I liked the idea, but you had a lot of big paragraphs wich could ...