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A very nice piece nonetheless, expresses true feelings and a picture of pairing with him and singularity as a paradox. "seldom is it this cheap" ... May i suggest a ...

Nice writing Samee7a, I really like the way you approach the imagery in the poem. Sounds deep with many meanings, but i think there is a mistake... if I'm not ...

Great story, very nice and more advanced than the old ones. The story can be understood literally and figuratively. I felt something missing in the story, but maybe that feeling ...

Great structure and rhythm. The simplicity of it gives its value, the more the words are honest the more the beauty of the work. Few mistakes nonetheless but still a ...

I'm looking forward to start reading your poetry :)

I think of it as a story for a horror movie, but a funny one. The idea of being fired from her job with all that love from her and ...

I totally agree with Anas, it's hard to see that as giving birth. The only word that is related to the topic is death! Words are strangely put away from ...

Thx Anas for your comment, the forgotten "I" was corrected, but the advanced part I may not agree with you because the reader doesn't have to get the same picture ...

Very deep but very obvious! The thing is that you need to give imagery for your feelings, don't just right it straight forward, metaphors and symbolic entities would be great ...

I saw nothing but a brilliant image of a life time, When i read those wonderful words... I could just draw pictures or even animate it for a movie!

This is my first post here... It is that how hard you try and how things look perfect, your lover may fail you! I hope you like it... My Last ...