shadowraiki

Being that this felt like a joke story, I won't be so harsh on it. But in reality, there isn't much to criticise. I loved it. I was laughing by ...

This was an interesting read and I would love to know if you had anything planned for them afterwards. But overall, there were no mistakes. There were a few minor ...

Hello and I hope you have a pleasant stay at YWS. Here is my review. While this piece is already short, you may want to work on the formatting. I ...

Good piece. Emotional, though if placed in the wrong context it might not have the same effect. Here are a few things I noticed: His breath was heavy and deep ...

I love the Witchcraft (Pendulum) A monster blocks your path, what do you do?

Congratulations everyone. Even if you didn't win, I bet it was something to remember.

Banned for making up words

Hello and welcome to the forums! I myself just started about a week ago, however I found this to be a refreshing place to hang out already. I found out ...

I like being alone more often than being with other people. It's great to have fun with others, but there are times when they act in certain ways and you ...

What I love most about this is that you explain a lot while saying nothing. I like that you never say a specific word for anything, but you hint at ...

:( My measly amount of points will not amount to much.

Cause were a non-profit organization and were having a bake sale (though not exactly for the money, more so to raise awareness). We needed a place to bake, so we ...

Banned because I had closed my eyes for 2 minutes and then my phone rang. One of my bosses reminded me of work so now I am angry.

Banned because... *yawn*, I'm going to sleep.

banned for being inconsiderate towards lazy people :wink: