shadowraiki

The way I saw it was that Adrian wanted to know more about the boy, but never did anything to get closer to him. It's like a one sided relationship. ...

Ha, I was just like you. I lurked for weeks before saying, "Effff it, let's make an account because I'm bored" and I'm glad I did. We have poetry, short ...

Banned because I'm a human being and that's what I do.

Scenary isn't usually my thing. I can't find the difference in beauty between a waterfall and a brick wall. But this was a really good description. Albeit, it was just ...

When time was not even time, a king was proclaimed, to rule over every abyss, ocean and land. On the day of his coronation, God and Lucifer descended to earth. ...

Banned because I actually finished a Sudoku puzzle this morning and I am proud of myself.

Granted. You now know all the words in the English dictionary but do not know what any of them mean. I wish I my novel would write itself.

Read this: \/ Hello, I wrote this piece this morning after I needed to do something to release my anger and to vent. Consider this piece an introduction as well ...

7/10; Or so you think the human race has been obliterated. In a desperate attempt to stop the meteor, USA and Russia teamed up to launch all of their nukes ...

Wooh, the biggest issue I saw was formatting, spelling, and punctuation. I corrected some of those for you, though I may have missed a few. As for format, split your ...

A Roman/European queen who murdered her husband to become ruler. Your palace is made of pure gold and draped with purple tapestries.

There isn't much to say that hasn't already been said. I agree that this is a nice, short piece. I hope you get a good grade for this. Another quote ...

You really set the mood for France with the use of a single french phrase. There were no grammar mistakes as far as I am concerned, but something stuck out ...

The tapping and clicking of old key boards at work.

Banned because I have red marks on my face where I was leaning on my arms and sleeping.