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Seizures of color, explosions of light, celestial shrapnel rains from the sky, bursting and shattering the tranquil night. Rebellious sparks attaining great height, never unnoticed by those who pass b

I just want to thank you all so much. It's great to hear what you have to say, both positive and negative, and Demoness, I'll look into that order. Thank ...

Someday I will run to where the thunderstorms go, when all is said and done. Someday I will find the land where I can walk and the wind will brush ...

I want to thank you all for your comments, they are extremely helpful and I seriously consider all of them. I feel like poetry is something that is often revisited ...

I used to have a red car. Dad gave me the parts. Pops lent a little money and somehow I made it start. Then I painted it American red like ...

Okay, this was excellent. I kind of prefer intense poems with big points behind them to ones just about a pretty river (though I do like those) but this was ...

This is the first section of a story I just started. There are two POVs, a girl's and a boy's. She has grown up with the idea that, as one ...

Does the highway ever sleep? In the dark of my bedroom, the face reads ten-eleven. It's a Tuesday night. (My mother always told me to be in bed by ten-eleven ...

“…sticking to the more open quarters where few houses were above single storey making for easy traveling and lots of open ground to see a threat well before its shadowy ...

I think this is a really great poem, I really think I understood it. We all feel fear, and I think you do a great job of portraying it. I ...

Your poem is a work of art. It really portrays emotion, I love it. To me it is bittersweet chocolate, but the ending really sums it all up. I can't ...

I love this story, I've always been a fan of new Cinderella's. Not that the original isn't good, but I like girls with independence! I'm not too picky, but I ...

First of all, fantastic prologue! I started it and wanted to keep reading, it had me thinking. What happened to this person/thing? Why was he/she born to kill? It has ...

please critique, I need advice!

Chapter Four - Lyss “Dammit!” I shot up. Not a good move. My head bonked a reading light, after which I used my own choice of swear words. Rubbing my ...