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Re: Teenager
As a fellow teenager, its like my life in poetry :P But, as a critic, I would have to say that it could have gotten more work. Some of the ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: The Gray Reign
I loved the way you described the environment, the setting of a war because it really captures that feeling. However, it could have been a tiny bit longer when describing ...
Feb 21, 2007
