servant4christ

Hey this is a great story!!! I am very much impressed, I enjoy all the descriptions you gave, This story means alot to me to because I know someone who ...

Chapter 1 "Careful" urged Trisella. Ne'car slowly edged away from the laser light. "Good, now follow me," she whispered harshly, Pennet rolled his eyes towards Rina's. Rina put her small ...

Okay I think this has a very good plot and it has well developed characters. I would however focus very hard on the spelling and the tenses especisally because some ...

Mayten saw whispered to her dragon,"Yaken! Let's go over there by Cil'ti," she said with a hint of mirth to her voice. Yaken gladly followed his master's request. When they ...

Mayten flew over to Tay. The storm seemed to be growing and the clouds darkened but Mayten was just happy to be free after weeks of rehab. "Mayten, don't forget ...

Taking a break on my other book, this is a good refresher, enjoy! Chapter 1- A Little More Than Average I'm your average teenage girl. I live in a small ...

Mayten climbed on her dragon's back, it had been a while since she had last ridden. The sky was dark and thunder rumbled in the distance. Her dragon nuzzled her ...

Name: Yaken Age: (Young) Gender: male Element: fire Appearance:long red muscular Personality: very agressive, generally dislikes people except for mayten, looks down on them, speaks his mind often

Here and ready to join! Name:Mayten Age:15 Gender:female Appearance:short, thin, mostly red long hair with treaks of brown,sparkling hazel eyes, long face, and long cape Personality: usually smiley lo

>Hey there, I know that I look like servant4christ but I'm really dragonet. I forgot my password, so for now I'm using my friend's account< Adam Stitch whined and layed ...

Alright I changed the bothersome font heh was pretty annoying wasn't it :)

Hello my dear friend, I haven't had time to read this whole thing through but yes, I agree it is a tad bit too long...maybe more than a tad...but fear ...

Thank you for your help! I edited it and made a few changes. I'm not completely done but hopefully it is readable now. Part 4 is coming soon...I hope

Hey! I'm new too! You seem like a very interesting person. Please PM me some of your stories! :elephant:

I am interested! I like how you tell the story from different points of view. That is one of my favorite things. I absolutely love all the descriptions of the ...