servant4christ

This is an acrostic poem I had to write for English class...enjoy! T-Thanksgiving's history started on a boat. H-History of pilgrims, so Bradford wrote. A-A trial at sea, a calamity ...

don't leave me hanging here!

Oooooo please keep writing this! I am impressed! This was one of the best things I have read all day!

Save me a spot I will put up my profile soon!

Okay now I am taking a break from fantasy all together and I will write the beginning of a romance book. (Man I am all over the place these days!) ...

Oooooo I love all the description! And the first sentence had me hooked! Keep writing!

Here I am ready to review! First of all,I liked the story, and it definitely has potential to be a best-seller romance novel! Now onto the boring stuff (a.k.a. grammar ...

I've been living to survive I'm forced to conform I've never felt alive And my heart is left torn They'll sterio-type me And tell me where to go They'll tell ...

Oooooo very interesting.....But I'm a little confused...what exactly happened on the beach? Very compelling, very much a page turner if I do say so myself :) Keep writing more! ( ...

Another exciting installment! I am thrilled at how this story is turning out. Well done!

Thanks to all who have commented! I will take your advice and I REALLY appreciate the compliments! Thanks for making my first attempt at writing a story in two months ...

Hey guys! I felt like taking a break on political stuff and instead trying my spin on the whole angels and demons thing :) I probebly won't continue any further ...

AHHHH!!!!! Wait! WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!! I think she should "break up with him" Or something else dramatic but please, end the chapter there! Add to the suspense, make this a page ...

I completely agree with sodapoplunchbox! I actually came back to see if you had written any more (which I usually don't do) And I was completely thrilled you had! And ...

This was interesting, I think you use the word "out" alot but besides that it was pretty good. There were some spelling mistakes and such, you can use the spell ...