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"I'm sorry...I'm so sorry," The girl mumbled as she patted her pockets for something. She pulled out a tissue and began dabbing her eyes gently. I didn't know what to ...

Okay...two things that I happened to catch " Carity shook Shanelle awake then wondered Wandered away relying on her to wake up Brendan to too ." then there was a ...

I fixed all the errors thank you guys so much for your reviews! They've been very encouraging. Considering I haven't written anything in like 4 months...

Oooo intriguing! Keep writing please!!!! I want to know how the party goes...details please! (pretend your readers are gossip queens who want to be informed!!!)

Okay so first of all I'd like to say I enjoyed the story and it was very well written. You have a natural writer's tongue which is a very satisfying ...

"Get him some water," The nurse ordered the lady. I gratefully accepted the cool drink and downed it quickly. My supposed mother stroked my head which I found quiet unnerving ...

Bleh ebooks? I prefer turning REAL pages over a touch screen. WAAAAAAYYYYY more satisfying!!!

Beep Beep Beep... That was the first thing I remember hearing after sailing through the air and landing on something hard. I couldn't move or open my eyes. I was ...

Remembering Emily Tragedy strikes when you least expect it. Like on a Birthday, or a holiday, or even just randomly. My troubles started on a perfect day with my perfect ...

I read the whole story of falling sun...from when you first posted it to this latest one...I must say I am very much impressed. I honestly think you could have ...

Very well written...I feel alot of thought and emotion behind this poem...I know poems don't have to rhyme or have a rhythm but I rather like it when they do...but ...

The three of them walked casually towards the city. Anyone who happened to be passing by would just think that an Egyptian girl was taking a stroll with her slaves. ...

She must have dosed off because before she knew it, the sun had sunk low in the sky. Gillia saw dark unfriendly looking clouds gathering in the distance. Good thought ...

Gillia's God Gillia doged behind a tree. All she could think was, they caught me! I can't believe they caught me! Sweat dripped into one of her dark chocolate brown ...

I am enjoying this immensly! More please!!!