servant4christ

I LOVE THIS!!!! So blunt, so honest, so real!!! I have to say I admire your writing. The characters are soooo believable, the dialogue is impecible, and the story is ...

Okay, I liked definately kept my attention :) You have a good piece here, I just have a few nitpicks... A pair of red stilettos came into the doorway of ...

Liked story, very cute :) You did a very good job with the descriptions! I could see it very vividly. The end might have been a teensy bit rushed but...that's ...

I like the blunt truth in this poem :) thought provoking! Keep up the good work!!!

I could scarcely breathe, were they telling me the truth or just taking advantage of my niavity? It was amazing how much I didn't know or remember. I think that ...

pretty good story so far...Just a few things to point out...one when the 'body' is talking why not make it the consious talking instead? And when you mentioned that the ...

I actually almost started joke...I just read a story about someone dying and I think you captured the emotion very well...I look forward to see how this story progresses. Post ...

Okay....awesome!!! I was waiting for this to come out...I like the physical attraction here, very alluring...but real romance starts in a friendship...That's just my opinion anyways...anywho...I like

As I lay in my hospital bed trying to remember what had happened I was interrupted in my thoughts by yet another visitor. The guy that walked in seemd to ...

Okay, pretty awesome I would have to say. Many people feel that they have different personalities inside of them. Myself included....I think I share two of the hree with you ...

Personally, I think ideas in general are dangerous and thus bad. Especially the biggest ones, as is the case for religion, but also the case for the patriotism, politics, conspiracy ...

liked it, it was very was deep and honest...the voice was young like a teenager. I have a few things to point out. Like maybe she over reacted just a ...

Your story is about a mathematician behind closed doors singing wicked.... As my last student files out of the classroom I take off my glasses and rub my eyes. It ...

Review my novel? I am aware it needs work and will take the best critique you can give me...I am not sensative :)

*Has read whole story* I really like this...though I wish you would have explained how Hayden and Annie broke up :/ besides that it was a very good story. I'm ...