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Like boulders on my shoulders, My body that carries the world Is weakening as I can hardly see a thing. Ain't clear enough to see something... Something that can keep ...

Honestly I'm not good at reviewing works.. but honestly, I can relate to that. It seems like something is keeping you from revealing who you are. "Insecurity! I guess...." Well. ...

I wish I could just place you on my back, Pack all the moments and put them inside a sack, Protect you from harm then attack, Duck when they try ...

The clouds are hovering the sky, Covering the light! Now It's dark, but I'm here. Don't cry. Summer's almost over. Ain't that good? Blessings come on rainy days. We just ...

Thanks for appreciating... In need of your comments to improve... :D

Well I'm not good at reviewing others work but I kinda like it. Your words were bold and I can feel clearly that you really love this guy. (how pityful) ...

No matter who you are, what you believe, what you do or what you did.. God loves you.. What an inspiring work. I liked it! Keep it up...

Sometimes it makes me wonder Why can't i make this better? Why I've chosen this to be bitter? Does it matter? As we walk our lives in separate ways, I'm ...

Thanks so much. I need more of your comments to solidify my work. :) I did some changes and I plan to formalize it soon... I still need your help...

Thanks so much. I need more of your comments to solidify my work. :) I did some changes and I plan to formalize it soon... I still need your help...

Thanks so much. I need more of your comments to solidify my work. :) I did some changes and I plan to formalize it soon... I still need your help...

Puzzled by how you deliver the words. Yep. Puzzled but I enjoyed reading it. :)

The instance that letting the reader feel the story is there but still need some arrangements. Hmm.. somehow related to my case. lol. Well, keep it up! ;)

Thanks for the comment dancingmangos.. :) Very good analysis.

the castle's breaking..she's just watching.. she's trembling.. she couldn't do anything.. her dream had suddenly disappeared.. and now she's troubled and feared.. she's waiting while watching the star