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Re: Hi :) I'm new
Hi, Jasmine. Welcome to YWS. We look forward to reading your literary soon. Right guys? :)
Dec 26, 2014 -
Re: B*******
Hahaha. I can't stop laughing! The title speaks the the story itself! Hahahaha. Nice one! I'm no good in reviewing but I can relate to this and I cant stop ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: 250,000 Miles
How I wish I could reverse it and make you stay forever But doubts keep us part but we're still happy for each other. I'm struggling here, trying to get ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Move
This is definitely a good one. I'll surely click LIKE!!! Very good...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Away~
I didn't want the breaking of the lines until I noticed that it was a song. Your words aren't deep enough but I would love to hear it. Prompt me ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Memoria In Aeterna
I know you're there shining above the earth Noticing my every motion's dirt. I tried to have clean, polished heart But on the edge, I can't set things apart. Red ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Lonesome Luna
Longing for you from here to there While trying to find something in you That can give me more reasons to wait, More reasons to search for a sign. With ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Indecency
I made a vow to change the world, but where am I now? Seeing the break of dawn, wondering how... I let go of my emotions and now I'm trapped ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Still Me
Feel me as you never wanna see me Like a monster beneath your bed. Like a moth approaching the fire, I'll be circling inside your head. Feel me cause I ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: *deleted*
jash, i'm not really good at reviewing as i am not considering myself as a writer.. But this story did capture some moments from my past though some parts are ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
i like it. Shame for the rapist! I believed that the victim was brave to face the truth at first, but she failed later and screwed everything. What a sad ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Morbid
"seriously heartbroken"
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: X-men: First Class - Charles Xavier.
Wow!! This is cool. I like it. :) Post some more...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: I'm New Here =/
Hello and welcome to YWS. Hope to see your works. :)
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: I'd like to write a poem
Hey, senzafine here. Your title have caught my attention. :) Well I'm not good at reviewing other's work but I kinda like it. Very flawless! Keep it up. -senzafine
Jun 11, 2011
