seeminglymeaningless

Now, you have some seriously, and I mean seriously, good reviews on this already. I sure do! Everyone who has review has been fantastic :) The reason why I requested ...

Hey Awesome :) Welcome back to YWS :P First impression: I like the feel of the story. The dark atmosphere you're attempting to create works well in the context of ...

A ding. . . ding. . . ding . . became DING-DING-DING, I think you should have described the ding becoming louder instead of just capitalizing the word 'Ding'. I ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the review. If I have learnt one thing at all, it's: post only in small increments. And I apologize for making you guys read that huge ...

You should "hide" this from the public. - Jai

So, I did some quick digging, and I can confidently say that your use of grammar has definitely improved from the original: Sky said hello to Sophie this morning it ...

Back again to add all the stuff I didn't have time to write about in my first post. First Stanza I felt that this stanza was absolutely unrelated to the ...

Sorry for not replying to this earlier, I was working on my university project going towards my bachelor of Secondary Education, (major English/Physics). Anywho. I agree with RachaelWater's comments a

I realize it's a bit late to be replying, but if you could tell us the parameters of the essay and what you're required to write about, then we'd be ...

Hey again :) Well, I finally reached my procrastination limits for the next couple of days :D :P I'm glad you took the time to review, Kiwi! I added some ...

Dreamy and everyone else who disliked Harry's name, I changed it to Harrison. Harry means "army power, or ruler of the army", so believe it or not, King Harry actually ...

Two things, for the record. One, you have the best bribes ever! I mean, honestly. Seriously. It's almost ridiculous how good your bribes are. Just when I said, "You know, ...

Rosey, Axl Rose is the lead singer of Guns and Roses, which is what Gary is listening to in the car :P

Hey Dreamy :D Finished most of my assignments (or the drafts, anyway), so here I am, replying to your review :) Gulford's eyes had a faraway look to them , ...

^ this o.O I... I'm just speechless.