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Re: The Magician, a folk tale
I don't know what to say. It's not often that I'm left speechless. *shakes head* This is the most useless review I've ever written, I imagine. I really enjoyed this ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Once Again
There's not much to say here, because as is this text is virtually perfect. It certainly is an interesting idea, and I would be completely fascinated if you continued this. ...
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: Royal Pain
Hey, I'm Jai and I'll be reviewing today :3 I was here for my parents, my mom is an actress in the Chicago Theater and this is the party to ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Universe of Dreams
Hey :) I'm Jai and I'll be reviewing this today. A story of truth, and though it might be disappointing to some, it is what it is, and I can't ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: My jealous zombie ex-girlfriend - chapter two
Hi Retro, I'm Jai. A few things before I begin: 1) It's really easy to make your story immediately desirable. Add spaces between the new line breaks. Scroll down below ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: just Sarah:Chapter 2
Hi Blue :) Well, this has been up for a loooong time with no review, so here I am. Hopefully to help you out :) Now, the only reason why ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: --
There are truly no words. I had fully intended to write a good long review for you, detailing errors, offering suggestions, criticising every other line. But no. This story is ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Honey I Love You
Hi :) I don't normally review lyrics, but I see that this has been available for review for some time now, and no one has taken up the challenge, so ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The Frankenstein Children
Hi Thomas, I'm Jai. Firstly I'd like to say that I actually read over your story first before my review. I seldom ever do this. I guess I just find ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Nature's Elements - Chapter Two
Hey Star, I'm Jai and I'm going to review this for today. I haven't read the previous chapter, just so you know. First off, you might like to hide your ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Smoke
Hullo Wayward, you ask and you shall receive. Before I begin my review though, I'd like to draw attention to the way you've submitted your story. Whilst the huge block ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Artful Creatures
Hi Cloud, sorry for the late check up. Been studying and all that jazz. Anywho, here I am to review the prologue of Artful Creatures. I really enjoyed Chapter One, ...
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: fixing the national debt
Hi Samuel :) I'm Jai. There is a problem that persists in this great country, The United States of America, which is holding us back form out true potential as ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Artful Creatures Chapter 1
Hey Cloud, welcome to YWS. Before I begin the actual review, I would like to start by talking about formatting. While the way you've submitted this chapter is fine, if ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Fallen Civilazation Chapter 1
EDIT: You also spelt "civilization" wrong in your title. Depending on your country, "civilization" can be spelt like that, or civilisation. - Jai Hey Nate. I'll be your reviewer today. ...
Dec 29, 2010
