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Jenny snatched Wiki away from Peter's sight, "You don't wanna mess with that kid, Wiki." Wiki tore his arm free, "What's it to you?" He said, feeling slightly like a ...

Jenny started walking towards the group of gathered children. Hyley trailed behind her, wiping his nose repetatively on his hairy, freckled forearm. "Hey, Whimpo - what's wrong with you?" Jenny ...

EDITED Nel hit the dog, and pressed two feet frantically on the brakes. The rear of her car fishtailed, leaving scorch marks on the road. Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck, ...

hey thanks! yeah. . . mice. . . coz of the "squeak, squeak" right? well. . . thanks for reading it! cheers! jai

Precariously, she held the heavy wooden spear in her hands as she ducked under a large hibiscus plant. ---- i think percariously should be somewhere in the middle of the ...

hey good story so far - but in the second part, there's this: Too fast for Kana, he grabbed her own gun and shot her in the head. --- i ...

this was hilarious!!!!! geez! my moustache was getting more action that I was, and I continued to become less and less sober, the more I started becoming jealous of my ...

hey wow! that was awesome! maybe u didn't intend it to be creepy, but man!!! gave me goosebumps everywhere! if this website was like i'd so totally favourite that!!!! nice ...

again, a nice peice of work! all that needs to be fixed are simple errors, along with your use of speech marks. for example: ‘He travels a lot’. ----------- this ...

hey! i liked this - pretty cool, and you ended it on a nice cliffhanger! i'm off to read the second part that i saw lurking in ur gallery. congratulations ...

kokobeans: thanks for such a positive review! - yeah the boy's name is jarred. thanks for the "never'd" suggestion - sometimes i get lazy writing, and add nonreal words. mischiefmaker: ...

jarred lay listening for the sounds listening. always listening. never doing. never interupting. just listening. the sounds started. normally they didn't start so soon after he went to bed. maybe. ...

Jenny groaned. Tried to roll over. She gasped in pain as her back scratched against metal. She tore her shirt struggling away from the greedy grasp of the cruel metal. ...

Name: Jenny Mains Age: 17 Specialties: cooking - it's all she knows Appearance: quite chubby, but tall. Painfully plain features, sunburns easily, glasses set on green eyes. Her hair is ...

why not write about something that is REALLY scary. eg: * I opened the fridge, hoping for some ham or something, and swore when the milk moved. I dropped the ...